Dr Pete Tanka’s Portal to Another World

A long long time ago a Dr called Pete Tankas was obsessed with building portals. He had made at least a hundred portals. 

Each year he walked into a portal to a different  dimension. He needed to use the switch to open and close the portal. Every portal had different creatures.

One time he skipped all the portals and he entered the last one but he had no clue of the danger that was coming. Suddenly  a  massive black claw dragged me out of the portal. When I looked back it was cat in a hat.

 I screamed so loud I made a volcano erupt. The cat in the hat miaowed with a friendly voice, “What are you doing here?” and I explained,” I live here…”                  

would you scream if you saw cat in a hat?

The Mysterious Oak Tree

 A long way down a deep forest there is an oak tree that has a face? When it hits 9 o’clock the oak tree walks around the forest with tree stump feet hitting the ground. It feels like a volcano eruption. He has a wooden face and green sparkling eyes. He screams, “I’m protector of the deep forest . Don’t come here at 9 o’clock because you meant to be in your  bed sleeping or maybe be watching a movie!! If you dare come in I will be hiding in the shadows waiting to strike a curse to make you a oak tree! But a kid called tom said this is so fake so he went in the deep forest at 10 o clock he packed his sandwich and went to the deep forest he was scared did i misston when the tree cures the the kids in to trees with there faces scary if i say to myself but then the person sawed the oak tree and it pounded on him and he got turned in to the new dealy  oke tree. 

Would you ever go into the deep forest alone?                   

The Brave Walking Rhino

A long long time ago a rhino called Jorge had a unison with crazy stunts. One time he flipped over a ring of fire but people wanted more like something no one has ever seen then he had an idea.

 He was going to walk over a plank between two 100 feet tall buildings. The rhino was terrified but he went for it anyway with courage.  One step at a time. He made it over the plank. He was happy and scared.

 When he got down he got a world record trophy! He was happy and he drank a lot of water. He felt like a happy rhino. 

• Would you go over a 100 feet plank?    

A long long time ago a guy called Sam was in a lab for an experiment. When Sam was in the machine the experiment went terribly wrong –  he got turned into a purple monster. He had razor sharp teeth and one eye and he smelled like  a subway sandwich and  pickles. He loved eating zucchinis. When the monster broke out of the lab he went straight  to the supermarket one by One.

He ate all of the zucchinis but then the people from the lab shot a net to catch the purple Monster but then  the monster used his claws to scratch one by one then he broke free and he

Ran far far away never seen again 60 years later people think the monster went back to the lab and he started up the Machine.

 He turned back to Sam. He was hungry like a monkey not eating bananas  so he ran home but then he saw a poster of him missing but he ran home to bed but every second when he slept he was kinda coming back to a Monster.

Was it a dream or real life?                                        

A Top Hat Tale 

One time a person called Xavier had a hat.

 Who knows what is under It? We all know he doesn’t take It off , Xavier only appears in the shadows he lives in a place called the great castle.

 One time a kid called Mike went there and he never came back. Soon a boy called Tim wanted to see what was under It. He went  to his friends  Josh, Tom and Jamie the next day

 He said, “Guys want to come to a great castle.?”

 Jamie said,  “You know that it’s haunted right?.”

I know just for ten minutes fine, ‘said the ‘friends’ when they got there we were scared then we saw Xavier moving in the forest like lightning.

 Saying I see you! Over and over again guys spread up then he took off his hat. It was a lizard bigger than a dragon with sharp teeth like glass and a scar on its right eye.

The scales were red and white I question how he feet that in his hat?  I nervously said to myself Tim was scared I screamed! Xavier how did you  feet that in your hat  ‘Xavier said nothing the lizard was about to gulp me up i had no faith so I sat nearly had a nap then i saw a bat wean I was about gulped up.

 My friends came to help me! to leave then I heard a scream was It mike we should go back. I said  no it’s too dangerous and said ‘Josh I will go! Said tom no it’s too dangerous said ‘Tim its good for a sacrifice but wean we said don’t go  tom was gone we waited and waited and then tom came back with Tim  josh said lets go now! 

What did you think about my story?.                           

Patty the Planet 

One time 100 years ago a scientist once looked through a telescope and he saw a planet with meat cheese and pickles and tomato!.

 The scientist was filled with curiosity. He waited day after day then one day It looked like a burger and the scientist discovered how he got here! All I remember was eating my sandwich. One person  stole my sandwich. Where I’m not on earth he was on patty Planet.

 He saw aliens with tomato heads pickle bodies. The scientist wanted to go back to his lab then he saw a rocket he wanted to escape so he ran into the rocket.

 Unfortunately it had no fuel. He tried to find some. Eventually he found the fuel in the kitchen. He also saw his sandwich so he grabbed both. He ate his sandwich, put the fuel in the rocket and he left faster then lightning 

Should I go back? I do have a rocket.             

Back up Arrived Just in Time

One time my real troopers invaded earth with laser guns and starships shooting lasers stronger than 100 hundred strikes of lightning hitting the ground. The army tried to fight back. We needed back up. Frighteningly, they heard jets and gun shots.

 The best army appeared in the sky above us. The chief shouted!  “We can’t lose!” As soon as possible the real troopers summoned

  The boss called Ak-34. He was overpowered. His powerful move is Laser Fist, doing 1 billion strikes of powerful nukes. The army was 

losing, then they used the overpowered beam and won. 

Do you think you can survive  vs real troopers? 

It all started when Grandpa Jurgen stole the mirrorball

 He was tall and he took the mirrorball and got hit by a ball then he tumbled. Then he saw Paul taking a call in the hall.

Then Jurgen saw the police coming through the hallway sprinting to him screaming! His name now  its time to bring

you to jail for stealing the mirrorball from the mall.

 Can I take my last call grandma pls get me out of prison. Then the cop said your free paul actually stole the mirrorball

 Did Paul steal the mirrorball or did Jurgen who?.

For writing this week, we wrote recounts about our holidays.  I worked really hard on my capital letters and full stops.                                                                    

             Holidays

I was grateful and happy for the holidays because I didn’t have to Wake up early. Eventually I woke up and my Mum drove me to my Cousin’s house  to stay the night. 

 When we got there we played football. and the score was six Each. and Then Marley kicked the ball but it was a save by me and I was super happy for the other team then we got a glass Of Water for each person. Then we had dinner and snuggled up in bed. The next day my Mum picked me up.

I really enjoyed my holidays. It was great to spend time with friends and family. The holidays are a more relaxing time. 

What did you do in the holidays?

This week we have been doing quick writes and we had to a pick a animal 

If I could  pick only one animal I would pick a  tiny monkey. I would pick a tiny monkey because it is small like an ant. They eat bananas and they drink water.

I will be a good  guardian angel like god in the sky. I will protect it from bigger animals by guarding it and having a Massive cage in the backyard.  I will have a big house in Levin.

Oh yes it is Pickle’s time to eat his breakfast. ” What do you want for breakfast?” asked Tom. Pickles replied,  “Bananas”.

What animal would you pick?